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mr pad wrote:Uhh I wasn't "hatin" the book. Just lauging at that comment that lots of people must have made about mr2s...
I do agree with you here. Does sound like a piece of creative writing someone would have written in school. "She hurtled forward as though stung by a hornet." Worst simile ever imo. That is what I would have written in Form 1, in fact I seem to recall I did write a simile very similar to that once but it was something about a bull being stung by a wasp. The writing is pretty lifeless and doesn't evoke any emotion for me. Others will have another view and I understand that so don't flame me.Snoozin wrote:Sounds like something I would have written in Form 2.
Quint wrote:Not just cock, large cock.
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